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Looks to full. Any good amateur like myself would have had half of the bottle gone before attempting a picture.
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1st one- don't have any other beefs than that the handlebar isn't fully in the photo. really nice shot.
2nd- Cars a little dark compared to the background IMO, a little bit a qustion of taste though. Some bits of the car are beautifully lit, play around with it in photoshop some more maybe?
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Originally posted by Pswirley View PostLooks to full. Any good amateur like myself would have had half of the bottle gone before attempting a picture.
Last edited by TurboHellrot; 06-11-2009, 07:16 AM.
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Red Label? Mike, I'm dissapointed.
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Mpower
1st- Already been said but the handlebars should be in the picture. Try to find a non conflicting background if possible, and use a larger aperture to separate the bike from the background. Nice pic other than that
2nd- Composition needs a little bit of work, if it was me I probably would have taken a couple steps closer and moved a little bit more behind the car to lessen some of the empty space above and below the car. The car is a little underexposed, dodging can take care of that in photoshop, along with cloning out some stuff such as the exit sign.
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looks good to me, maybe a litle **over (edited) exposed, and could give a little tilt to the cameraLast edited by TurboHellrot; 06-12-2009, 03:52 PM.
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Tis' a nice shot, looks a little bit overexposed to me, at least in most areas. The front end is pretty sharp but gets a little fuzzy towards the back. The only way to fix that is a higher f-stop and/or a faster shutter speed. I don't recommending tilting the camera
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