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    Post your shots in here to be looked over by the "pros", and get some constructive criticism!

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    • #3
      ^^^ Looks too "proish". You need to amature it up a little.
      Until I get a better pic...

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      • #4
        Looks to full. Any good amateur like myself would have had half of the bottle gone before attempting a picture.

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        • #5
          U r not n00b

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          • #6
            Do it.



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            • #7
              1st one- don't have any other beefs than that the handlebar isn't fully in the photo. really nice shot.

              2nd- Cars a little dark compared to the background IMO, a little bit a qustion of taste though. Some bits of the car are beautifully lit, play around with it in photoshop some more maybe?

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              • #8
                Originally posted by Pswirley View Post
                Looks to full. Any good amateur like myself would have had half of the bottle gone before attempting a picture.
                you mean like this?

                Last edited by TurboHellrot; 06-11-2009, 07:16 AM.

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                • #9
                  Red Label? Mike, I'm dissapointed.

                  Mr. Belvedere

                  I want to buy your single 4x100 Ronal Racing center

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                  • #10
                    Mpower

                    1st- Already been said but the handlebars should be in the picture. Try to find a non conflicting background if possible, and use a larger aperture to separate the bike from the background. Nice pic other than that

                    2nd- Composition needs a little bit of work, if it was me I probably would have taken a couple steps closer and moved a little bit more behind the car to lessen some of the empty space above and below the car. The car is a little underexposed, dodging can take care of that in photoshop, along with cloning out some stuff such as the exit sign.

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                    • #11
                      Im a NoOb, but I try


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                      • #12
                        looks good to me, maybe a litle **over (edited) exposed, and could give a little tilt to the camera
                        Last edited by TurboHellrot; 06-12-2009, 03:52 PM.

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                        • #13
                          Tis' a nice shot, looks a little bit overexposed to me, at least in most areas. The front end is pretty sharp but gets a little fuzzy towards the back. The only way to fix that is a higher f-stop and/or a faster shutter speed. I don't recommending tilting the camera

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                          • #14
                            Nice shot.



                            eh? too much trash is hurting it i think.

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                            • #15
                              Here.




                              Originally posted by ProjektONE View Post
                              Im a NoOb, but I try

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